I think some of this is just a lack of strong technical writing... insert my usual plug for Plain Style https://www.amazon.com/Plain-Style-Techniques-Emphatic-Business/dp/081441429X/.
For instance, "I fell ur full of crap" is more clearly written "ur full of crap".
I'd like to see a better written layout of this argument... you get sucked into the technical writing and lose the thread yourself.
Is Bankei a Zen Master
What is Zen outside the context of the Chinese tradition
What is the Zen catechism?
Japanese culture v/s Zen
Idk if any of these is more relevant or even if they are interesting...