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No, it looks the same.

The hashes format the heading. Because you've deleted the word 'blurb' and pasted your actual blurb, it's put it all in the heading format.

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Education | College Guide*|* 46 Pages |June 17, 2016 | $9.99

##Blurb

A detailed but concise guide to finding and obtaining scholarships. Devon Coombs graduated Magna Cum Laude from California State University, Northridge’s Accountancy and Business Honors programs. While at CSUN, he earned the University Scholarship, the Thomas C. Bloch Achievement Scholarship, the Noski Family Scholarship, the Torchbearer Award, and the Outstanding Graduating Senior Award, among many other awards and scholarships. In this book, he writes about the process he used to obtain over $40,000 in awards and scholarships. He also includes information directly from University Scholarship Committees. Included with the purchase of this book are supplementary video lectures, found at: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbUTI0_011OiffB_FFU-ptQ. Devon has mentored many students through financial aid and scholarship processes. This book is a strong resource for people looking to minimize their college expenses.

##A note from the author

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##Review copies

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I've deleted the 'Note from the author' part. That section is not the place to be salesy, it's your opportunity to talk directly to your potential readers. Don't say "Devon did this... devon did that", say "I wrote this book over the course of a couple of years, because I genuinely believe I can help students..." It's a note from the author, from you. Personalise it and you'll get a better response.