What is Reddit's opinion of THE ELEMENTS OF STYLE (UPDATED 2011 EDITION)?
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By popularity on Reddit, this product is:

#109 in Grammar Reference books

#95 in Words, Language & Grammar Reference books

A copy of Strunk & White for Kindle (or any Kindle app) is available for $0.99 from Amazon here.

That's the Australian Amazon site - but I assume it will redirect you to your own countries version.

Commas are the biggest distraction I see. You use just a few too many commas, but it's an easy issue to correct. Good luck and keep writing!

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