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Everyone learns differently. I like the format of your posts fine, but others may not. If you really feel a need to work on this now, try experimenting with different formats and see if it changes the responses you get.

For working on your writing in general, I recommend William Zinser, "On Writing Well".

Don't let the need for perfect communication become self-censoring - your doing good work.