Okay
so
where the fuck do i begin holy shit this was beyond adorable.
All the fun, cute, awkward energy in this seriously captured the feel of this whole script and just...God it felt real, it felt like getting approached by a girl I knew for years who, hey, surprise surprise, like ya. I love how like honestly there was a lil flub in the script but you just made it fit so well? Which 1. takes talent but 2. ADDED SO MUCH TO THIS YOU DONT KNOW
I think the only real criticism I have is your pacing? It felt pretty rushed in the beginning, but as time went on and you got further in the script it slowed down and it got more calm. Its honestly kind of a nit picky thing though bc I can kinda get the impression that the pace you had at the start is just your like...natural pace, of like, speaking, which, ahain, *made it feel more human* eeeeeeee!!
And just like, in the miscellaneous of "eehehehehe shit i really liked"
1. Your voice is 🥴
2. The way you said "Can you hold me" in the after glow section??!? I dunno what it was but something about how you said it just....eehsdjkfsdjk shivers!!!! 🥴
3. Your sound fx usage was really good! And in the future, if you want you can do what I've done for sound fx in the past and either check out the Cymatics LIFE libraries (great for a lot of projects, may or may not have used a couple in a secret project....), as well as MyNoise. Good places for various effects, check them out bc the way you used effects in this was fucking fantastic.