I'll write just the general issues I see, since critiquing these stories individually would take ages.
Right off the bat - Never use fancy fonts. Ever. It makes it way harder to read and understand what's going on in your work. Use Times New Roman, always.
Dialogue shouldn't be written like that. This is example of the correct way.
"You should get Facebook, Mark," Jon said, "I'm sure you'd love it!"
"I'll take your word on it!" I replied.
Try not to use "-ly" words to describe something. Don't say "The neighbors were lovely."
Say something like "The neighbors stopped by my house to greet me into their small community. They gave me a wrapped gift as a welcoming present, their smiles were the warmest I've seen in a long while."
Try to cut out words that add nothing to a story. Things like "very, really, just" etc. don't really contribute to a sentence, and should be cut out. I'm not 'very tired,' I'm 'exhausted'
Try using https://prowritingaid.com/ to check your work. Most of its features are locked behind a paywall, meaning you can't use them for longer pieces of work, but by using the "Real-Time" tool you can find a lot of really good suggestions on how to improve your work.
No problem.
https://www.amazon.com/Art-Craft-Storytelling-Comprehensive-Techniques/dp/1582975590
I think that this book has some pretty good advice for creating a page-turning read, and sort of developing that technique. It’s a very practical book and is blunt with you— you must accomplish storytelling magic within the first couple of sentences, or your story will fail.