I did some preliminary research for a social research class, and though he might appear professional in that second photo, he'd be less desirable to an interviewer, and seem less trustworthy to his patients, if any of those tats were to be seen. From my preliminary findings, any jewelry at all lessens professionalism. Men with piercings are found less trustworthy to clients, and men or women with visible tattoos are found less trustworthy to clients. In the studies I was looking at, I did not look at any particular discipline.
If that man is truly successful, it's likely because he is a doctor to people who are sympathetic to lots of body art, or he has been successful in keeping his tattoos hidden.
It's been a solid year since I did this, and I wasn't particularly great in this class, but I found my first round of research if anyone's interested.
If you're even more lazy like me, use easybib. All you need is the isbn or website address and author (depending on the site, sometimes it doesn't grab it automatically). I don't think you need an account, you can log on with Google and export it to drive out download as an MS Word file. Hope this helps!
Sure. Here is my master list of sources.
I tend to write using the Schaffer paragraph, and then get my sources using EndNote. It creates the citing for you, you can also use EasyBib for citing. It saves you a bunch of time and thinking. :)
It’s coming along nicely!
Overall the main issues lie in wording and fluency. I suggest focusing on one point for a longer period of time.
The concluding sentences could use a bit of work in order to both wrap-up the previous paragraph, and lead into the following one.
Dont be afraid to use more paragraphs. It makes the essay easier to read, and it separates each point out nicely.
The tenses are generally consistent, as are the contractions so good job on that!
I noticed a shortfall in analysis on some quotes or pieces of third-party/external evidence you brought in.
Generally its ideal to make a point, bring in a piece of evidence (such as a quote, or statistic) and then analyze or explain why that piece of evidence helps prove your point.
In-text citations are a must.
I’m assuming you are following MLA format, so parenthesis would be the way to go about doing that.
Make sure to cite each piece of evidence brought in so you could tie it to your works cited.
If you don't already know: Easybib is a great tool to make a works cited or bibliography for you!
Good luck on the essay :)
In your MLA citation you should have the authors name in the bibliography. Here is a source with citations and Easybib automatically fills information when available so it might be able to help you find the author. Unless you link me to the database page or give the name of the article I can't directly help you but these sources should help.
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Textfugu is very cool from what I've seen if you are trying to learn Japanese. I've only checked out the free chapters though, but price for the rest of it isn't bad...thinking about getting it.
I'm not sure how underrated Livemocha is, but I guess I'll put it here. It's a free Rosetta-Stone-like language learning website where people can give reviews on your text/voice submissions. I like it.
Also, EasyBib is pretty helpful when making an MLA bibliography. I used it several times in college. Gotta pay for APA though.