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I should start by saying this is very well written and i like it. Please don't take my blunt criticism as anything bad.
OK. It seems you're using commas when you need periods, and excluding periods completely. Your language is great but you need to work on punctuation. If you're going to continue writing seriously, try reading The Elements of Style. Its boring, but pretty much defines all punctuation rules for modern english. You're a really good writer, so its a shame for readers to get lost in run-on sentences.
Also, I'm not sure if it is the reddit formatting that removed your line breaks, or if you failed to use them. I'll add an edited copy below. My additions in bold.
You should check out Carlos Castaneda. This act sounds like Don Genaro showing off for apprentices. Other acts of men (and women) of power include scrying, projecting, guarding, and even being in two places at once. The best starting place The Teachings of Don Juan: A Yaqui Way of Knowledge https://www.amazon.com/dp/0671600419/ref=cm_sw_r_apan_glt_fabc_ZK8BPEN2Q2QWA0246X91
I think I would rather have my cat piss in the tub, than in a cat box that stinks? Luckily for me, Yoda refuses to use a cat box and demands to go outside, where he seems to choose some nearby vacant land for his business.
As for the toilet, many people train their cats to use it. There are devices that you suspend over the toilet and fill with cat litter, to get the cat used to it. Then you take it away and the cat keeps using the toilet.
I was also addicted to my own game. I think I was the only one to ever feel that way too...only me and one other person have actually beaten it
I hope you enjoyed this story. If you did, feel free to check out my other work here on Reddit. If you're interested in my story that he makes a cameo in, you can buy my book on the Amazon Kindle store called The White Box. Free if you have Kindle Unlimited.
Thank you! :) That's where a lot of these stories come from, hanging out with a few asshole buddies and catching tales of stupid shit we've done in the past. When I remember a good one, I make a note and try to write it when time allows.
Around last Christmas I started taking that seriously, and as a result, my first book got self-published on Amazon a couple weeks ago. So I strongly encourage anyone who writes things on here, or even just enjoys hanging out with their buddies and bullshitting after work, to take a shot at writing a book. It's a ton of work, but it's pretty damn rewarding to see other people enjoy it. :)
You CAN do this, it's hard, but not impossible.
Hell, my dumb ass managed to do it, https://www.amazon.com/dp/B08B39QPLK
So, just to be clear, the TSA exists only to make people feel safe. Homeland Security did tests and found out that the TSA missed almost every real threat they sent through airport security. Second, the cop is not at all trained with firearms, he's just some dude with a badge and a shitty government job at the airport.
Finally, you can buy that online, if you really want to.